video link: https://youtu.be/NVztNYJ9JVo
Before filming this pitch, I thought it could have a huge improvement over my last one. As a matter of fact, although now I feel more comfortable making the pitch, I still have a long way to go. I'm still kind of afraid of being in front of a camera. Even though I feel very comfortable speaking English as my second language in person, for each pitch I recorded, I still feel kind of nervous when speaking, so language is also another difficulty I need to overcome.
Hello Yudi,
ReplyDeleteGood job with your elevator pitch. I think you had a great idea, but a few things you can improve upon. First off, you sway a little too much while you speak. Look more confidently by focusing on your movement and only move when it makes sense.
Secondly, you held an iPad the whole time. I think by using your hands a little more, you could showcase some more emotion and make your pitch more captivating.